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I am stuck, really stuck. I’ve started a historical (is it an historical? I’ve always wondered about that) novel based on the life of Mary Allerton Cushman, who came to the New World on the Mayflower and lived to the ripe old age of 82. She saw so much history! Trying a different genre is a challenge I set myself, and what a challenge it has become. My problem is: Mary is four years old during the voyage and writing in the voice of a four-year-old is not working for me, nor anyone else as it turns out. I am also writing in third person, which I find difficult. That may be because my three murder mysteries were written in first person, as is the WIP fourth, and it’s a voice in which I’m comfortable. I’ve consulted both my critique groups, and also my sterling editor Alison Williams, and am still struggling after numerous rewrites. So I’m going to try something different and switch to first person but have two POVs – Mary and her father Isaac. Isaac can provide an in depth POV early on, as he was one of the original Separatists, while Mary can have the longer view as soon as she is old enough – probably ten or twelve.                                                              Isaac Allerton There are no pictures of Mary and she is just an addendum to her husband’s monument! The research is overwhelming. I thought I knew a lot about the Separatists (they weren’t called Pilgrims until much later), having grown up in Plymouth and been a tour guide at Plimoth Plantation. Wrong! There is a massive amount of knowledge out there yet to learn. One thing I have developed, though – a profound respect for this doughty group of settlers and the frequently horrible and terrifying conditions they faced. I could never match them in fortitude and faith, and I hope to convey that with Mary’s story. In the meantime, I take breaks by writing my fourth mystery, which is like having a picnic. As an aside, I just finished watching the video Hugh of Hug’s News and Views took during the Second Annual Blogger’s Bash in London. https://hughsviewsandnews.com/2016/06/15/meet-some-of-the-bloggers-on-video-from-the-2nd-annual-bloggers-bash/ Such fun to see bloggers I actually know. Ten packages of Oreos to Hugh. Maybe next year…? 0 0

I am always grateful for my friends in the blogosphere who follow my paltry offerings and find them interesting! I have had almost 25,000 views since I began this blog, and that figure staggers my imagination. THANK YOU! I am just catching up with my followers, so if your name is not here, stand by! Here is a list of my new followers as a shout out in thanks: Fitness Inspirational: https://fitnessinspirational.wordpress.com Great fit bodies! Kittens That I Love: https://kittensthatilove.wordpress.com  Wonderful cat photos  for all you cat lovers out there. George Edy at GÂNDURI CURATE PENTRU LUME ADUNATE  https://dordecanaan.wordpress.com  Most recently he has a story in English called the Rabbi’s advice Gary Jeffries at https://fictionisfood.wordpress.com  He writes an inspirational blog, the most recent post is A  Random Act of Kindness Marlin Carter’s marketing at https://marketingwithmarlinblog.wordpress.com for ways to improve your marketing skills – what we all need Donna Dechen Birdwell at https://donnadechenbirdwell.com   Donna is an author, artist and archeologist whose book Way of the Serpent I just reviewed. Check her out! bahelberg1 at mywritinglifexposed.wordpress.com/https://mywritinglifexposed.wordpress.com https://mywritinglifexposed.wordpress.com A prolific blog author and a daughter of farming parents and of the farmland of Northwest Ohio, she writes about her life growing up, films, horses and farm animals – what’s not to like? The most amazing pictures of animals:  https://incredibleanimalpics.wordpress.com Definitely worth a look each day for the AWWW factor. https://anthonymize.net The author was born in Boston, Massachusetts and now live in Southern California, is married and father to three daughters, a teacher and student to it all. His influences range from the homeless to Harvard professors, and his blog is a collection of words and general understandings brought to you by me. David Ellis aka Too Full to Write at https://toofulltowrite.com   David is a 37 year old male, a writer, podcaster, lyricist, humorist, novelist/author and poet who lives in Tunbridge Wells, England. He likes/loves films, music, books, TV series, computer games, etc. He will chat with you about all sorts of stuff on FaceBook, Twitter or the chat of your choice! His books are flash fiction, short stories and poetry. https://actions15.wordpress.com who lives in Newport Beach, CA (one of my former homes) and writes, travels and tries to live a focused life. Akansha Negi at https://akanshanegi.wordpress.com/ She lives in India and has the most beautiful photos and information about India and its surroundings. Fabulous! Araav Gupta at https://theaaravblog.wordpress.com/ She writes wonderfully lyrical blogs about the human condition and soul. pixey1234556 at https://fantagexstarzblog.wordpress.com  She blogs all about her random life/hobbies/things. Pixy is a young blogger who lives in Texas but was born in Nepal and doesn’t know what she wants to do when she grows up. Any followers out there who can relate? Kevin at https://kevsravesandreviews.wordpress.com He writes exceptional book reviews about exceptional books and I clearly met him through many of my blogging buddies. Book Haunt (great name!) at https://bookhaunt.com   She is a 51 yr. old woman from Scottsdale, AZ currently running two new blogs: bookhaunt.com and thedefinedintrovert.wordpress.com. One is for book reviews and the other is for whatever strikes her fancy. Both are just for fun! She will rweview your books but is currently backlogged. 0 0

My newest followers: Ben Chittock at https://bchittock.wordpress.com/about/ Ben does movie reviews, most recently The Revenant and The Dead Pool Juliacastorp at https://juliacastorp.wordpress.com She is Romanian and describes herself as a linguist and lecture lover, a woman of present (hippie hippie). She has some nice posts on female actors. More of more who posts at https://moreofmoreblog.wordpress.com, She is a young blogger who writes about school, dancing, and bullying – and reminds me what it was like to be young with the future ahead! Ana Spoke at http://anaspoke.com. She is in middle management and a self-published author of a new book entitled Shizzle. Candice Louisa Daquin who blogs at https://thefeatheredsleep.wordpress.com. Candice is a writer with seven books to her credit (available on Amazon and Barnes and Noble) and blogs on personal subjects with sensitivity. Samantha at https://gh0stpupp3t.wordpress.com. She posts an eclectic blog – one of her latest combines Justin Trudeau and Matt Damon! Brittany at https://blg2011motherof2.wordpress.com Her blog is a collection of writings, some inspirational and others random. She is the author of a series of inspirational paperbacks. Darshan Desai at https://darshandesai54.wordpress.com. This blogger provides advice on how to use online marketing platforms and cute kid pictures! Carlos Lopez and Adrián B. G. at https://lascronicasdelotromundo.wordpress.com/ They blog in Spanish for those of you who are fluent (I’m a scanner for general meaning!) and post about their books, writing and other authors!  Bharathy Jayaraman at bharathy78. She is currently working in the U.S. as software Quality Analyst by profession and a mother of a son who is residing in India with her parents. She chooses to write about the different things such as basket weaving and quilting, the books she reads and so on. You can find her on Facebook at https://www.facebook.com/bharathy.jayaraman.5 Reza at https://rrrnnr.wordpress.com/ She blogs in both German and English. Jolant Kalinowska at http://photokalino.wordpress.com. She is a photographer and her pictures are amazing. J Good at http://jgoodwithsports.com/spotlight/ He blogs about sports! I am a sports nut so this blog SPEAKS to me! Rilwan Jarboh at http://rilwanjarboh.com/2015 He is a student at SOS Hermann Gmeiner High School in Gambia. He’s also a computer programmer and interested in all sorts of blogs. Check him out! Thanks to all of these bloggers for following me and do check them out! 0 0

For several years now, I’ve been reading about millennial offspring moving back in with their parents. Not to worry, won’t be us. Ah, but the chickens have come home to roost… My daughter and son-in-law are now living with us. They had resided in Los Angeles for five years, but it became clear (as it had for us when we lived there), that they couldn’t afford a house and they grew tired of their 900 square feet. Plus many of their closest friends are here in North Carolina. So they made the big trek back across the country- in one week – bringing their jobs with them since they can work from here. They had a lot of fun in LA – the weather, the endless sources of activities, things to see, and good restaurants more than make up for the cost of living. It did for us, too. But there came a time when roots needed to grow and a family started. And North Carolina isn’t exactly chopped liver. I’m still having a good time looking at houses for them, since they have a mortgage set up and don’t plan to live with us forever. What I’ve learned is that a lot of houses are dogs, as I mentioned in a previous post. Truth in advertising is not necessarily part of selling real estate. This past weekend, Cameron went to the beach with her three closest friends since high school. They named themselves the Red Hot Mamacitas beach back then; now they’re just the Citas.The last of them married a month ago, they are all now living in Chapel Hill, and they had their photos taken together in their wedding gowns on the beach. This is a special group of young women. So wSo far,  we’re doing just fine with the new arrangement – my daughter and I have a strong bond and her husband is an easy-going bloke. Would love comments from folks with their grown children living with them. How’s it going? 0 0

I’m in love with dragons so I just had to re-post this by Charles Yallowtiz. Stay tune for information on his new book!   Toothless We’ve all been there.  Minding our own business when we stumble onto a sign that there are dragons nearby.  If we’re lucky, the beast is already gone or simply passing through the area.  Yet there are times where they stick around.  So here’s what to look for to see if you need an exterminator. You haven’t seen the cat in days.  Sure, Princess Tangerine wanders off from time to time.  This feels different.  Maybe it’s because she hasn’t reacted to you running the can opener over a loudspeaker.  Could even be the that her food bowl is missing . . . along with the floor it was on. There’s a lot of smoke in and around the house.  You’ve called the fire department, but that hasn’t stopped the problem.  Then again, the truck has been outside for the last few days, so maybe it’s a really big fight where you can’t see it.  For now, just keep the ceiling fans on. Sure are a lot of earthquakes lately.  Nothing severe, but the house keeps shaking.  It would make more sense if you were on a fault line.  You’re not, but maybe it’s one that hasn’t been identified yet. Somebody keeps leaving gold coins and gems around the house and yard.  Not that you’re complaining.  Finders keepers and all that.  Still, it’s getting hard to explain to the bank and local jewelers.  Also, gold coins are not as accepted as gold cards. Random bursts of wind keep knocking trees over.  This tends to happen along with sudden darkness that lasts for a second or two.  You called the local weatherman who told you to use Facebook instead.  Even then, all he could say is that predicting weather is more of an art than a science.  You get the sense that he’s been drinking to forget something. A band of short, armored men with an array of beards keep showing up on your doorstep.  Sometimes they show up with a tall, old guy that spontaneously disappears for other business.  You think you saw a kid with them too, but it could have been a trick of the light.  Unlike the people with large saddles, these guys don’t seem to take ‘No’ for an answer. Uh, you see a dragon.  Seriously, they aren’t that good at hiding in suburbia. 0 0

I decided to read this book in preparation to review the second in this series, based on a terrific review by a fellow blogger. I was so taken with it, I decided to review this one as well. This book is a really wrenching description of the future of mankind in its third age, and as a result, I really don’t want to know how we got to a third age! The story opens lovingly, with the President of Hemera injecting his wife and children with a drug that will let them sleep away the next hundred years, to avoid the ravages of the imminent nuclear destruction of the planet. His hope is that when they awaken, he can lead in the rebuilding of the planet. One hundred years later, a distress signal from Hemera is received on its sister planet Erebus, notifying the corrupt government there that the President and his family are alive and expecting rescue. Lane is a bounty hunter, having been dishonorably discharged from Erebus’ army for a friendly fire incident, and he is chosen by Colonel Padon to be a member of what Dugan hopes will be a lost mission. Padon, a man who Lane loathes, was Lane’s immediate superior when he was in the Army, and he blackmails Lane to force him to join the mission. The operation is expected to be straightforward, because every indicator describes a planet as a dry shell of barren sand, all forms of life having been extinguished by the nuclear war. Intelligence reports weren’t intelligent, and the operation is anything but what was planned, and the person leading it was in on that secret. The team is composed of soldiers who mistrust and even hate each other, including a former lover of Lane’s, whose brother was killed in the friendly fire. Egos and over confidence are rampant, at least until they land, a landing which almost doesn’t succeed because of mechanical difficulties.  Another reviewer describes Hemera as a “yellow ball of misery,” and I couldn’t have said it better: desert dry sand for miles and no apparent life, at least until the ship is attacked by feral inhabitants. Think Mad Max. The author does an excellent job of painting the bleakness of the landscape and the rubble and ruin of the capitol city of Magna. Tension ramps up as the team makes its way to the origin of the signal, tracked and picked off by horrifying monsters, the product of ghastly genetic mutations. Lane faces the toughest battle of his life to survive the operation, with the additional danger of a team member sent with orders to kill him. This was a gritty and occasionally gruesome tale, with more graphic violence than in my usual reading choices. However, the author does such a good job that I bought into the characters and their emotions – loyalty, love, hatred and mind-numbing fear.  It’s a story told from multiple points of view, although Lane’s is the core. I was never confused and seeing through different eyes enriched my understanding of the world the author has created and of the various motives of the characters. This book is not for the faint of heart.  Think it’s appeal with be stronger to men and to those readers who have an affinity for dystopian worlds. Nevertheless, it’s a heart-stopping adventure and I will read the sequel soon. Four and a half stars About the author (from Amazon): Dylan J. Morgan was born in New Zealand and raised in the United Kingdom. He now works in Norway and writes during those rare quiet moments amid a hectic family life: after dark, with limited sustenance, and when his creative essence is plagued the most by tormented visions. A member of the Horror Writers Association, he has published 8 books, all available on Amazon. You can find him: @dylanjmorgan https://dylanjmorgan.wordpress.com/ https://www.goodreads.com/author/show/3156560.Dylan_J_Morgan You can find The Dead Lands on Amazon and Goodreads https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/22591375-the-dead-lands?ac=1&from_search=true 0 0

I decided to dip my reading toe into some science fiction with this book, and I found it intriguing and entertaining. What would you do if you could live forever? That’s the premise of this book, and the results reinforce Newton’s third law: For every action, there is an equal and opposite reaction. It’s 2125, and thanks to prophylactic pill called Chulel, aging is a thing of the past. Fertility has declined, population growth is non-existent, and people live young, healthy lives for centuries. But if you live that long, can your brain possibly store all your memories? Not to fear, your memories are now under corporate control. Jenda Swain is a living the life of a valued cog in the Dallas offices of Your Journal, having worked there for 90 years. Everyone relies on YJ as a secure repository for their personal stories, photos, thoughts and feeling. She is content with her life and career until she meets an aged woman who claims to know her, but of whom Jenda has no memory. She wonders if she ever had. Jenda is about to take a required, every-seven-years sabbatical, and on the spur of the moment and with the vague recollection that she used to paint, decides to trade her reservations for a year in California for an artists’ colony in Mexico, where her mother had gone a few times. Her decision is fateful. There she meets handsome Luis-Martín Zenobia, an anthropologist by training but following a study of the traditional arts and crafts of the surviving native populations of Mexico, has become an artist of some note. They fall in love, and Jenda discovers Luis-Martín is a retrogressive, painting in real oils on archival canvasses and has dissident tendencies, untrusting of a corporation that stores memories.  He introduces her to some of his friends, who share his distrust, and triggers memories she can’t jibe with what she knows of herself from YJ.  This leads her to discover what truly happens after each person’s sabbatical and how YJ manipulates society. The answer to the question I asked is woven into the romance of these two – Jenda, who becomes aware that large parts of her life, as it exists in YJ, are missing, and discovers how the company is manipulating everyone’s lives – and Luis- Martín, who embraces enduring creation and has plans to disrupt YJ and essentially restart society. The book is full of futuristic surprises: a wrist-worn digilet, which is a computer with a colloidal drive; clothes that are designed to be thrown away after one wearing so no washing is required and fashion is always up to date; paintings that are three-dimensional facsimiles and recyclable; fabricated trees which produce new leave according to a timetable; pills for everything, including the enhancement of the sexual experience and the slightest feeling of anxiety or sadness.  However, the issues of the story line are familiar to all of us: social media, corporate politics, consumerism. The author has just taken these issues and extended them into the future. Did I like this book? Yes and no. Its premise is inherently interesting, it made me think, its various threads are woven together neatly, and it has an emotional ending. The problem was the fact I couldn’t connect with Jenda until about halfway the way through the book, when her struggle to find her lost memories and reclaim her past finally got to me. This may have been because there was a lot of telling and as a result, I felt more like a watcher than a participant in her life. Despite my differences with the writing style, the book kept me engaged, more so in the second half, and I intend to read the second volume in this series. About the author (from Amazon): Donna Dechen Birdwell is an anthropologist whose curiosity about what makes human beings tick propelled her to travel widely, listening to the stories of many different cultures and eventually coming up with a few of her own. High on the list of countries she knows and loves are Belize, Guatemala, Mexico, Costa Rica, Cuba, England, Ireland, Spain, Nepal, India, and Tibet. Her work is deeply influenced by the stories and imagery of these places. Donna is an artist, poet, and photographer as well as a novelist. She holds a Ph.D. in anthropology from Southern Methodist University and previously taught at Lamar University in Beaumont, Texas. She now writes, paints, and photographs in Austin. You can find Donna Birdwell at: https://www.facebook.com/wideworldhome/ @wideworldhome @donnadechen And you can find Way of the Serpent on Amazon at: 0 0

Here is the cover you voters selected. It was a very close vote!  I think the artist did a great job with all my suggestions, and thanks so much for your choice! Death by Pumpkin has gone to Create Space, the indie publisher I have used for the previous two books. After a few bumps and with the hope there are no more of them, I hope to have it up on Amazon and Kindle by early July. Get ready to find out what lies behind this cover, literally and figuratively! 0 0

As promised, but a little late, my cover reveal will be posted next week! I have been largely absent from the blogoverse this past week while I re-polished the polished polishing of my third book, but it is being sent off this weekend.  So I will be more visible soon. In the meantime, there will be some book reviews and I need to introduce you to new followers. So, see you soon — same bat place, same bat station. 0 0